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Have already reviewed this and put very detailed notes on the image but the image has been removed from that concept now so all my notes are gone :(
Basically - Act Now! Your have... is too pushy and also needs to read You have. Design wise it would be better ranged left rather than centred - it jars being centred. Further the wording focusses on the negative. I would more likely say You're one step closer to more blemish free skin.
Then in the body copy not mention that it's not the cheapest and focus on the positives - leave the user to decide on if it's expensive or worth the money etc. Basically just bullet point.
- Doctor approved
- Only product guaranteed to work in one 15 minute application or your money back
- Limited Time offer
The line height in the body copy could be increased to help the type breathe and then more space through the pricing and the Place order button as this all feels a bit cramped.
The home page needs some serious work on the design of the banner. The red underlined bold copy and the repeated elements and the image being unlinked to the sell copy. She looks great but the typography on her is really not good.
I would look at trying to get a similar feel to smiley girl in full width with one nice headline on the image with a good single sell line under. The as featured in in a block at the bottom nice and small and the navigation on the image but more integrated into the image block.
The product packaging is great and the colours of the site link in well with it.
The typography on your Step 1, secure checkout etc works really well and this is nice and clear.
Hope this all helps
https://www.instantwartmoleremover.com/checkout.php
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Navigation font
This font feels a tiny bit large and a bit clunky - a smaller size and a bit more subtlety may help here.
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Good clear progress steps
This part is great. Nice and clear and cleanly done although the margin to the left of the type feels a bit tight.
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Product and guarantee all looking great too
The packaging looks great and the 30 day money back guarantee is looking fine.
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It's this area which really needs work
The head, body copy, Lmited Time offer and place order button: The head I think would be better ranged left - also it should read You have nothing to lose rather than Your have... The Act Now feels a bit pushy and also this whole area feels a bit too wordy. Rather than saying you have nothing to lose. Rather sell it with 'You're a step closer to more blemish free skin' or something like that. A more positive approach... The body needs more space in the line height to help it breathe. Again I'd focus on a more positive word approach rather than focus on the fact that it's not the least expensive just focus on it being . Quality Product . Doctor Approved . Only product guaranteed to work in one 15 minute application or your money back. . Limited Time Offer I'd bullet point those four points. That way the fact that it costs more doesn't have to be mentioned but people should automatically assume that the extra price is because it's the ONLY product guar
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This page feels too cheap in design terms
This page feels particularly like it really needs designing properly for the web. The model is great but the typography on her is awful. The Buy it Now centred in the panel next to it and the extra copy below is very badly designed. The type isn't aligning at the bottom with the bottom of the image. Guaranteed Wart Removal in red and underlined feels a very old fashioned and clunky ugly way of trying to get attention from the viewer. The As seen advertised could do with separating out from the rest of the content more. Maybe in a line at the bottom rather than at the top or in a boxed out area. I would look at trying to find a nice large full width image with the same feel as your nice smiley woman and then find one nice sell line to put on the image. Maybe have a tagline under that a bit smaller. The product shots could go smaller and the navigation could sit on top of an area of sky on the right - you can always extend sky areas to help bring all the elements of your banner to
