A Review of Renefx Box Redesign by Ivan Kocis

Leaf, drops font effects

  • Ivan Kocis

    Ivan Kocis

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    Leaf, drops font effects

    Posted on Jul 04, 2010 at 10:13 AM

    Well, here is almost 40 degrees Celsius as I am writing this and I wish I could drink one glass of this right NOW! :) But, lets get back on what we are here for! Excellent design, refreshing on a first look, but little (just little corrections of the font) will give your design even more refreshing look: - in "ICED POWER DRINK" insert few bubbles in "green" area and try adding some gradient in that section (from yellow to green) - add few more leaves in a design and change the place you have placed this one leaf in your design (maybe few leaves beneath and around "ICED POWER DRINK" text) - water drops on a big leaf could be little bit brighter and smaller so you can put even few of them more on that leaf! - "empty" the glass just a little bit and make her more "sweatier" - On a "RENEFX" you can add a little stroke lines - green on a "RENE" and yellow on a "FX" Well, this is all from me this time! :) P.S.: For me, your design work just fine, but few advices to try some variations you dont find like a insult, isn`t it?