A Review of Personal logo by Patrick Niebrzydowski

legibility

  • Patrick Niebrzydowski

    Patrick Niebrzydowski

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    legibility

    Posted on Jul 01, 2010 at 9:38 PM

    The first thing I think you need to think about is that the logos are fairly difficult to distinguish. I thought it said Avitart until I read your description, and the top ones almost look like Asia.

    webdesign really runs together and should probably have some sort of division.

    I think 2a is my favorite of all, but concept 1 really intrigues me.

    I'm curious as to what the mark is supposed to represent? Do the green dots mean anything? Is there a reason they are in the place they are? Is the mark supposed to look like a lowercase a? If so I have to wonder why as it doesn't seem to really fit your name.

    As was said earlier, the fonts are a little bit weak, especially in concept 2 and "webdesign" in 1a.

    • Vita Levchenko
      Vita Levchenko commented:
      Posted: on Jul 02, 2010 at 10:07 PM

      Patrick, dots do not mean anything....they are just part of my style which I tried to reflect in the logo. The same with the mark. Your questions are very valid to ask when designing a logo for a client. But here I do my own personal logo. Everything I want it to do is to reflect my preferred style of design or my personality. Thank you for the feedback.