aboutOne_Circle.jpg
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gradient
remove it
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drop shadow
make it slightly thinner and lighter maybe 50%
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Not a fan. maybe its the wheel, reminds me too much of a color pallete. It seems very busy and doesn't leave much of a impression on me.
aboutOne_Sun.jpg
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logo
not inspiring and generally pretty dull
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font
is old school and not original, just doesn't work
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tagline
it's kind of airy fairy, stick with the first or the last
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I prefer this one overall. Has a positive feeling, while being easy to read and professional. It also gives me the impression that AboutOne is about people, which I find important
aboutOne_Orange.jpg
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why an orange slice
also it wont read correctly... it could misplaced with AboutCne... The font's pretty naff to....
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I really like this design, but the half of an orange slice leaves me feeling like Im only getting half of One.
Thank you Joni!