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I would never guess that this site is for a hair saloon. This must be clear no matter which style you pursue - visitors arriving at the page must immediately know that this is a hair saloon. Browse existing saloon website and see which common characteristics they share. A newspaper layout might not work after all...
Second, the text sections must have clear titles so they content can be scanned - few will read the text to learn what it is.
I have other comments, but I believe the first one should be addressed before further feedback will be helpful.
Good luck
