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Thats really the only big thing that ruins this "fab" design. I cant believe i just said that... wow..
anyway. Here are some smaller things you could do to improve this
Make the leaf smaller, and put some more of them, maybe 4-5, but have them maybe 2/3 to half the size.
I would add some styling to the RENEFX. Since that is the business isnt it?
I like the colors you chose However i think you should make your greens more like the Lime green in the picture.
Which btw, I personally like. although. If you could. see if you can get a picture with the drink "sloshing" out of the cup.
I think the BIG leaf in the bottom could use some work. Make the little "dewdrop" smaller, and add more of them.
also, the background stipes on the "POWER YOU MIND..." would also work well as a background for the word RENE
The only other thing is make the 500ml stuff smaller, or put it somewhere else, It looks weird with the background being half leaf half.. not..
Good luck! and nicely Done!
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Luke Marohn commented:Np! and definitely redo the guy XD it doesn't fit. and thats awesome that you are going to get a "sloshier" version I had thought you meant that the drink would maybe be in another glass or something.
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lol, its not a futuristic spaceman, it is an element of the original design but i dont know if i want to redesign that one too... the glass, as ive said in the description is not yet final until i can find a better version of it, a "sloshing" effect is what i have in mind..
thank you so much for the other tips..it really helps..^_^