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I think you've made some good updates to this design. I still think it's got some work to make it on par with your other designs.
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Bar breaks up the page
Having breaks in the page is usually a good thing, but this one is a little too forceful. The navigation color makes it difficult to break your eyes from it and continue with the rest of the page.
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Darker color
I would play with putting a different color in the background. If you had a darker color with the constitution still as the overlay, it would help separate the content from the background.
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Different color
This color works OK with the layout as is, but all together you have a pretty washed out hum-drum look to this one. If you made the background color darker, you should also make this lighter. maybe matching the gold at the top.
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rework this area
This entire navigation/search looks like an afterthought. I think playing with the links so they worked with this top nav and playing a little more with this part will help this top area quite a bit.
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separation
As I stated earlier, this page just is there right now. In order to make this look as polished as your others, this content area needs some more work. I would play with separating it from the background. I would also play with the typography here. In parts ::
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Like Here
It is too loose. There is too much space in between these news items.
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In other parts it's too tight
There should be more space between the date and content.
