• Nitin Kapoor

    Nitin Kapoor

    Rank: 7 Student

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    Posted on Jun 23, 2010 at 11:58 AM

    I like the second one much better than the first one as i think the yellowish glow on 1st one is getting more attention. Definately 2nd one :)

    Over all very heat design.

    It needs more more on the logo as currently on 2nd one it over all site is nice but logo is very simple and not going well with over all theme.

    The center blue part could be handled diffently as blue is making is not going very well...may be try few more dull colors

    over all very nice

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  • 1

    Bar breaks up the page

    Having breaks in the page is usually a good thing, but this one is a little too forceful. The navigation color makes it difficult to break your eyes from it and continue with the rest of the page.

  • 2

    Darker color

    I would play with putting a different color in the background. If you had a darker color with the constitution still as the overlay, it would help separate the content from the background.

  • 3

    Different color

    This color works OK with the layout as is, but all together you have a pretty washed out hum-drum look to this one. If you made the background color darker, you should also make this lighter. maybe matching the gold at the top.

  • 4

    rework this area

    This entire navigation/search looks like an afterthought. I think playing with the links so they worked with this top nav and playing a little more with this part will help this top area quite a bit.

  • 5

    separation

    As I stated earlier, this page just is there right now. In order to make this look as polished as your others, this content area needs some more work. I would play with separating it from the background. I would also play with the typography here. In parts ::

  • 6

    Like Here

    It is too loose. There is too much space in between these news items.

  • 7

    In other parts it's too tight

    There should be more space between the date and content.