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    Browns

    There are too many browns in this design, I recommend you choose another color to complement this to break it up a little.

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    Logo

    There is a different logo in each of your drafts. Are you also redesigning their logo? I personally think this one is weak. I live in DC area and have been to this building a few times. I would not recognize the building from any other building in DC (except the capital and white house of course). I think the other two logos are stronger.

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    Stand Out

    With all the browns and lack of border around this area, it seems to be blending into the rest of the page. I did prefer the other two "feature" areas

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    Keep Tweaking

    I'm like where you're going with these little feature boxes, but I don't think you're quite done yet. I would play with borders, shading, or playing with the titles here to make them feel a little more finished.

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    separation

    I think these areas need some separation and definition from one another. Like the rest of the page, everything seems to just blend together.

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    Logo II

    If you choose to keep this logo, I would try this as a test: Make your logo the same light brown that the titles of this nav bar are. Make the nav bar a little taller and have the logo/homepage link be the first part of the bar. So scooch over the categories and put the logo where "research our collections" currently sits.

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