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I'm not sure why you've moved to a brand new concept. I'm guessing your client is asking for more? I think your other concepts were much stronger than this one.
I really like this page of the archives site, maybe you could pull some of this if you have to have another concept? http://www.archives.gov/nae/
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Browns
There are too many browns in this design, I recommend you choose another color to complement this to break it up a little.
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Logo
There is a different logo in each of your drafts. Are you also redesigning their logo? I personally think this one is weak. I live in DC area and have been to this building a few times. I would not recognize the building from any other building in DC (except the capital and white house of course). I think the other two logos are stronger.
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Stand Out
With all the browns and lack of border around this area, it seems to be blending into the rest of the page. I did prefer the other two "feature" areas
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Keep Tweaking
I'm like where you're going with these little feature boxes, but I don't think you're quite done yet. I would play with borders, shading, or playing with the titles here to make them feel a little more finished.
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separation
I think these areas need some separation and definition from one another. Like the rest of the page, everything seems to just blend together.
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Logo II
If you choose to keep this logo, I would try this as a test: Make your logo the same light brown that the titles of this nav bar are. Make the nav bar a little taller and have the logo/homepage link be the first part of the bar. So scooch over the categories and put the logo where "research our collections" currently sits.
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there is nothing more to say :), excellent feedback.