A Review of Logo Design for Musical Company by Robert Rawlins

separation of the type

  • Robert Rawlins

    Robert Rawlins

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 4
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    separation of the type

    Posted on Aug 26, 2009 at 7:33 AM

    really excellent design, it is about the readability of that type, I would probably remove the type as an overlay and place it underneath the guitar, it's the cross points of the guitar outline and the text where you get the confusion.

    Really nice work though, like it a lot.

    • Enrico Bonardi
      Enrico Bonardi commented:
      Posted: on Aug 26, 2009 at 7:41 AM

      thanks Robert for your review. I think you're, in fact the B&W version the light grey guitar border don't interfere too much with the logotype. I don't think i will move the logotype under because i want the cable to connect with the guitar (as in real world...) but I will follow your advice and maybe try a lighter color of the guitar in the colored version to achieve the same result of the B&W thing...

      Thanks

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