• Brandon Boyce

    Brandon Boyce

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    Minor Touchup

    Posted on Jun 10, 2010 at 11:50 AM

    I really like the first one (logo5), I only have three concerns about it.

    1. The bear looks a little awkward, I think his left eye needs to be more defined, a small black area in the curve of his nose should make it look a lot better.
    2. It's a very wide logo, which may make it difficult to use on certain things... maybe do a companion version that is narrower with the words stacked instead of beside each other?
    3. The strokes that make up the mountains are very thin, they will be difficult to see if they ever have it embroidered or do anything that is not large format/high resolution. You could do some broad shadowing in black on the sides that would make them more defined.