A Review of Pattersons by Joseph Dougherty

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  • Joseph Dougherty

    Joseph Dougherty

    Rank: 5 Advanced

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
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    Posted on Jun 09, 2010 at 6:42 PM

    Other than the placement of "Click to Enlarge" which was mentioned, it looks really cool. Really nice work.

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  • 1

    move to the left

    This link is currently being over-emphasized as part of the body text. I'd consider moving it to the left side.

  • 2

    categories?

    Instead of a navigation link (which might confuse people), I'd suggest placing the categories in the right sidebar and/or in the footer.

  • 3

    contact

    Will this page be different from the form and contact information on the frontpage? If not, I'd consider taking this page out or moving it to the footer.

  • 4

    second menu

    If the site's sub-pages are going to be long, then adding second primary menu is okay. If the pages are going to be about this long, then perhaps keeping only the sub-menu (e.g. sitemap, about us, contact) is fine.