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An original concept no dough. What I would do more to it is play with the typography a little (letter spacing, style etc.) Also I would stay with just the red and not add another color. The overall design is monochromatic, so I would use the red only for important parts, like you actually do. Stay to it.
Also since there is the banner area breaking the grid, maybe it would be a good idea to have more elements get "out of the box". That way the originality will stand out more.
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too much rounded corners
Try to join this blocks
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Is it the good font size?
