A Review of Pattersons by Ben Hewitt

I would even up the width of the left panel with the right panel

1

move to the left

This link is currently being over-emphasized as part of the body text. I'd consider moving it to the left side.
2

categories?

Instead of a navigation link (which might confuse people), I'd suggest placing the categories in the right sidebar and/or in the footer.
3

contact

Will this page be different from the form and contact information on the frontpage? If not, I'd consider taking this page out or moving it to the footer.

4

second menu

If the site's sub-pages are going to be long, then adding second primary menu is okay. If the pages are going to be about this long, then perhaps keeping only the sub-menu (e.g. sitemap, about us, contact) is fine.