A Review of Logo Design by Bryan Mathews

second one

  • Bryan Mathews

    Bryan Mathews

    Rank: 7 Student

    1077

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 5
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    second one

    Posted on Jun 09, 2010 at 12:22 AM

    first one looks like 2 logos...go with the secon one....i like everything about it. i cant tell what business it is though

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  • 1

    Alignment

    Put the edge of the box and B on the same height. This will guide the viewers eye

  • 2

    Alignment

    Put the edge of the box and B on the same height. This will guide the viewers eye

  • 3

    Font

    I really like the font. However, did you try using one which has a symmetric B? It may attract more attention that way and may look more down to earth.

  • 4

    A

    It may be a lot of work without a proper 3d program, but you could try making the box translucent (as one of the above readers pointed out) and make a three dimensional "a" which shines through. I think "boxes" are dangerous, because people that think in terms of boxes are not open or creative. They are closed, boxed, introverted, lost inside theirselves. Play around with that concept a bit and it might ease things up. - in combination with some other font for "box" (as mentioned in 2), you could really create something outstanding. I really love the rounded font inside the edgy box! Keep it that way :)