A Review of logo re-design by Jason

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  • Jason

    Jason

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    Posted on Jun 02, 2010 at 5:08 PM

    I like number 1, but I'd change the 'vacations' to no gradient, especially for printing purposes.

    Also, this really feels like it'd be better if the bird were to the side, not on top of the letters. I didn't know a kiwi was a type of bird until I researched it. That made the logo look very strange, I thought it was a pear branching off from the letter 'w' at first.

    Good concept with the bird, I like the font and its placement, just try moving that bird around.

    Great start