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Molnar- here is what i think you can work on (IMO):
- the hello page image (guy with laptop- that could be u)- please see if you could find an alternate.
- i like "hello" instead of home.
- i am not sure about the sequence of the navigation items- you can do this instead: Hello!, About me, Portfolio, Testimonials and Contact. Your 'About Me' is kind of extension of 'Hello!'
- you might wanna create a sub-section links under Portfolio section, Web Design, Photo etc.
- the background color/style has nothing new- nothing much going on there..
my personal site i have also used the page sliding kind of effect - something similar to what u have- you can take a look at http://www.akumar.com
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Abhishek Kumar commented:hey-
the issue with the photograph- there was something which did not 'feel' right.. let me try explaining that- may be it was the gesture- a bit uncomfortable gesture- not very natural.. that's what i think. The other thing is, if you are a web designer- it does not mean that the photograph u choose should be the one where you are working on a laptop- it could also be you simply playing a guitar, i mean you on a laptop and then saying i do web development is a very obvious and may be that's why it didn't 'feel' right.
And one more reason could be, when you say 'Hello!!' on your page and insert an image- get a photograph facing users, eye to eye contact- and say hello.
so in one word, put a bit more natural picture of yours- kill the laptop and interact with users.
hope it helps.
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I feel too, that the photo is not the right one, but I can't put in words why is that. Can you tell me what is wrong with it? Or Why doesn't fit on the page?
Probably I will keep this one-page-layout style..but I will redesign the all page.
Thanks for your review! :)