• Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    ummm...

    Posted on May 26, 2010 at 3:39 PM

    To be honest this looks like a typical Microsoft site, there's not that much to it.

    I'll add some notes, that way I might be able to explain myself better.

    I think overall you can design, but you really need to go back and research what your competitors around the world are doing, because if I was referred to you, I would not go any further than the homepage, because your site doesn't inspire me...

    Sorry, I do not mean to offend, just my opinion...

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    Why

    why is this here? is this an image? If so, google will probably end up ignoring the site, because it will see blank...

  • 2

    what's this for?

    I don't understand why there is floating text above the main nav...

  • 3

    Main Navigation

    Is fairly simple and doesn't really catch my eye, you want visitors to explore the site, not ignore it. Also there seems to be no 'on' state or 'hover' state... suggest also making fully across the screen and bigger

  • 4

    About us?

    I assume that this will be on all pages? If so, I would say remove it, so it only shows up on about us page...

  • 5

    too much text

    In all honesty, these need to have images with 3 lines of text at the most and then a read more...

  • 6

    Alignment & spacing

    to me this looks really odd... I would move the content boxes to the middle of the page

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    Microsfot Partner

    Move this and the contact info to the footer

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    Logo

    This should be at the top of the page and smaller

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    Footer Navigation

    make the footer more prominent, this just looks like an after thought

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    backround image

    wow... this is fairly un-imaginative, looks like XP wallpaper, try something different, just because you are a Microsoft partner doesn't mean you need to reflect their OS...

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    this is the same as the first

    with a different navigation

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