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For me the site is is too copy intensive. On average you have about 3-5 seconds to get and keep someones attention. Have some graphics that will help create interest break up copy and and give it a better flow.
I like the nav in 4.jpg That background image helps anchor the page. Overall a good start.
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Why
why is this here? is this an image? If so, google will probably end up ignoring the site, because it will see blank...
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what's this for?
I don't understand why there is floating text above the main nav...
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Main Navigation
Is fairly simple and doesn't really catch my eye, you want visitors to explore the site, not ignore it. Also there seems to be no 'on' state or 'hover' state... suggest also making fully across the screen and bigger
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About us?
I assume that this will be on all pages? If so, I would say remove it, so it only shows up on about us page...
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too much text
In all honesty, these need to have images with 3 lines of text at the most and then a read more...
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Alignment & spacing
to me this looks really odd... I would move the content boxes to the middle of the page
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Microsfot Partner
Move this and the contact info to the footer
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Logo
This should be at the top of the page and smaller
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Footer Navigation
make the footer more prominent, this just looks like an after thought
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backround image
wow... this is fairly un-imaginative, looks like XP wallpaper, try something different, just because you are a Microsoft partner doesn't mean you need to reflect their OS...
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this is the same as the first
with a different navigation
