• Donna Williams

    Donna Williams

    Rank: 4 Master

    9

    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    pick #1

    Posted on Jun 15, 2009 at 12:58 AM

    Second one (with the heavy gray around the globe) looks too corporate and a bit old school (to me). The first has a wave -- nice with a subtle glimpse of the world, but not too obvious. Like how the blue text is slightly faded, though why the black "surf"? I understand your wanting to differentiate, but what about picking up the darker blue of the wave? Then surf could have the same faded look as world -- would be cool. I think the harsh black text stops engagement. All I see at first is SURF, whereas if it were all shades of blue I would be drawn in more. Looks great, though!