A Review of Business Cards by Amy Feger

a few minor adjustments

  • Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

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    a few minor adjustments

    Posted on May 20, 2010 at 12:18 PM

    Hi Rebecca,

    I really like this concept with the puzzle pieces and how you intigrated it into your logo. After exploring a couple strong colors together, I would work on bringing together the alignments on the front.

    So, if you were to consider making the RK bigger so the left and right of the stems of the letters align to the right and left side of the name underneath. Then I would take in consideration how the bulleted text below aligns to your name above it. (Maybe even take those bullets out and see how it looks.)

    I think you only need your name once on the front, besides your RK logo. So, if I had to choose I would take out the one under the RK and keep the other one.

    I would maybe bring in your name closer to the words Graphic Designer, so relatively we know they belong together. No matter your size choice of your name I would imagine that you may want to have it align on the right end to the words "Graphic designer" as well as the left.

    So, great concept. This is an awsome start Rebecca.