A Review of Logo Design by Gfgj J

Would change typography!

  • Gfgj J

    Gfgj J

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    Would change typography!

    Posted on May 20, 2010 at 3:05 AM

    Overall idea is good. But if I may suggest some changes.

    What I would do is: I would align all letters in aBox sign and would make all of them either bold or regular. If I wanted to separate "a" and "box" I would do it with color.

    The "creative" type seems a little less visible than it should be in my opinion, so I think it should be bold or a little bigger.

    I would also remove all thin borders from the cube icon.

    And just a suggestion you may try: Make the abox sign really small beside the cube. Perhaps the size of the "creative" letters but black and put it by the bottom-right corner of the cube.

    Very good choice of color.

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  • 1

    Alignment

    Put the edge of the box and B on the same height. This will guide the viewers eye

  • 2

    Alignment

    Put the edge of the box and B on the same height. This will guide the viewers eye

  • 3

    Font

    I really like the font. However, did you try using one which has a symmetric B? It may attract more attention that way and may look more down to earth.

  • 4

    A

    It may be a lot of work without a proper 3d program, but you could try making the box translucent (as one of the above readers pointed out) and make a three dimensional "a" which shines through. I think "boxes" are dangerous, because people that think in terms of boxes are not open or creative. They are closed, boxed, introverted, lost inside theirselves. Play around with that concept a bit and it might ease things up. - in combination with some other font for "box" (as mentioned in 2), you could really create something outstanding. I really love the rounded font inside the edgy box! Keep it that way :)