-
Hey there, I favor the second image. Why? Because it removes redundant information. The colors are OK, but I think they could be a bit more intense, more contrasted, after all we are talking about CREATIVE here. For some more see my notes.
Untitled-11.jpg
-
1
Alignment
Put the edge of the box and B on the same height. This will guide the viewers eye
-
2
Alignment
Put the edge of the box and B on the same height. This will guide the viewers eye
-
3
Font
I really like the font. However, did you try using one which has a symmetric B? It may attract more attention that way and may look more down to earth.
-
4
A
It may be a lot of work without a proper 3d program, but you could try making the box translucent (as one of the above readers pointed out) and make a three dimensional "a" which shines through. I think "boxes" are dangerous, because people that think in terms of boxes are not open or creative. They are closed, boxed, introverted, lost inside theirselves. Play around with that concept a bit and it might ease things up. - in combination with some other font for "box" (as mentioned in 2), you could really create something outstanding. I really love the rounded font inside the edgy box! Keep it that way :)
