• Ali Zaman

    Ali Zaman

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    Great start

    Posted on May 16, 2010 at 6:37 AM

    When showing wireframes, and especially if it's just to show layout and structure avoild putting any colour on it at all. The first thing people notice is the colour and they end up commenting on that rather what you want them to comment on - which is the layout. I quite like the layout of your design, it uses a strong grid structure, information is where I would expect to find it and it looks clean and well organised. I can understand why you've kept the blog posts and news stories separate, the only point I'd make is if you want the news stories to be noticed first move that block to the left. Also agree with Brian, the javascript slider numbers either need to be left aligned or sit on top of the image. But great start, good luck with it!

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    This area can probably be unified

    Think about combining the news and blog posts. Usually only one outlet is needed for companies.

  • 2

    Unify the footer

    Perhaps it's just visual representation of the footer, but I would unite all of these three boxes into one with a different background. All of this is utility functionality and eliminating "boxing" will make the design look cleaner.

  • 3

    Good placement of search box

    The search box is right where users expect it. On the other hand, "Search:" label is really not needed here.

  • 4

    1 liner menu

    I would go with a 1 line menu. I don't know if it's possible but it would make the menu more easy to scan and more room on the page.

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    Great headline

    Great bold headline that's screaming "read me" :)

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    Action areas / buttons

    Try to make the most important stand out. Else, there are to many action buttons next to each other.

  • 7

    Not related

    These 2 do not releate with eachother ... separate it, or move it elsewhere.

  • 8

    Not noticeable

    There links are barely noticeable. Maybe place a similar link at the very bottom of the article box, this is where users expect it.

  • 9

    Rename it

    Try "read more", its an descriptive action. Will generate more clicks.

  • 10

    Why no title here?

    It seems inconsistent with the boxes on the right and left. Unless you want to make it less noticeable / important.

  • 11

    Combine

    As Aurimas already said: Try to combine these. It would make them more interesting to read (more content).

  • 12

    Thumbnails

    Add more thumbnails to the page or else it will look dull lilke a newspaper column.

  • 13

    Move it to the top

    Bump this up ... this is how the user interacts with your site. It's important.

  • 14

    Language

    Language selection here? Why?

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    Integrate

    Integrate these into a separate area. I don't have any brilliant ideas, but it's a mess right now. Maybe adding some of them to the main menu (drop down)?

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    Test

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