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I like the different parts of the page. It is just putting them together that seems to be the struggle. I do like the change to having the window open toward structure today.
I think I like the authors above the blue line with the line just above the bottom material. If you went with that, I would center the main image between the top box and the authors.
If you could find a way to have the 3D boxes be twisted to where some of the points come out toward us, that would add a cool effect. Right now all we see is one side. Here is a thought that just came to me. What if you have the top text be related to the "old market structure" in boring-ness and put on the left side of the top of the page. Then have the bottom text related to the "new market structure" in coolness and scrunched more to the right side of the page at the bottom. Just a random thought.
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Chris Blair commented:There is something about the top and bottom blocks that is not setting well with me. I've been just sitting here looking at it trying to figure it out.
It might be the blank space to the right of the top and to the left of the bottom. It might be the font being in ALL CAPS. That makes the reading slower. Honestly, last review I didn't even make it all the way through the bottom paragraph. Try lower case and see how that looks to the eye.
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Thanks for your comments! I'll definitly try and play around with your ideas. I just added a new concept to try and tie it together more... let me know what you think.. Thanks!