A Review of Redefining Market Structure Article by Daniel Hollands

Nice, but..

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    Nice, but..

    Posted on May 12, 2010 at 11:32 AM

    I like the idea behind the image, but I think that the 'window' should face the other way (with the edge we can see being on the new side), and a bit wider, maybe actively showing something being 'changed'.

    Mind you, I'm just nit-picking, as it is, it works well :)

    • Tiffany Gagnon
      Tiffany Gagnon commented:
      Posted: on May 12, 2010 at 11:37 AM

      Thanks for the comments, I'l try and play around with switching the window and adjusting the width. I was struggling with making somethign actively changed. I tried to show that in the top blue block... but maybe I need to add something more

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    • Tiffany Gagnon
      Tiffany Gagnon commented:
      Posted: on May 12, 2010 at 11:46 AM

      Ps I just added a new version with your suggestions, its number #3

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    • Daniel Hollands
      Daniel Hollands commented:
      Posted: on May 12, 2010 at 11:47 AM

      That one looks much better - I don't know why, it just does :)

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    • Tiffany Gagnon
      Tiffany Gagnon commented:
      Posted: on May 12, 2010 at 2:16 PM

      Thanks again for your suggestions. I just posted a new concept to try and tie everything together a little more. Let me know what you think. Thanks!

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