A Review of Timber Merchant Online Shop by Michael Gunner

Good start, needs some tweaking though.

  • Michael Gunner

    Michael Gunner

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    Good start, needs some tweaking though.

    Posted on Apr 23, 2010 at 4:55 AM

    • Find a better texture. This one is too bright, too dominating. Or maybe just scrap it altogether, but possibly keep it for the menu.
    • Logos. They don't sit well on the texture.
    • Menu. Lists are boring to look at, and not engaging. Try and find a more visually appealing way to link people to other pages.
    • Search bar. I only just noticed it! Make it stand out more, more obvious. Again, this is a texture problem.

    I give originality a low score because the use of the wooden texture is very common and very obvious.

    Other than that, this is a good start and I look forward to seeing where you go with it.

    • Alan Horne
      Alan Horne commented:
      Posted: on Apr 23, 2010 at 5:05 AM

      Yeah i was thinking the texture was too bright, so might dull that down a notch.

      The logos and menu im stuck with at the moment, although i may look into another way of dispolaying the logo, maybe a bit of paper of something coming over the design. The menu has to be the way it is, i have no option on that.

      I agree on the search bar, tried so many things on this and just didn't seem to get anything i really liked.

    • Michael Gunner
      Michael Gunner commented:
      Posted: on Apr 23, 2010 at 5:15 AM

      Maybe just have the search bar white like the main content? Shame about the menu, looks a bit cluttered but that's not your fault. Maybe instead of a texture there's a more subtle way of communicating the wood theme.

      this has got some great ideas http://www.cssleak.com/Category/Websites-Using-Wood-Elements.html