A Review of BPM Magazine Advert by Marius Stuparu

wall of text - use one column

  • Marius Stuparu

    Marius Stuparu

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 1
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    wall of text - use one column

    Posted on Apr 23, 2010 at 3:53 AM

    Do something about the text, it's too much. Talk to the people, convince them that'll ruin the message. Also, as Miranda said, full justify looks bad - left justification is enough. Try to put it in one column if you can't cut it short.

    Not much DJ-related graphics (I like the idea of vinyl player in #2 though - add more).

    And emphasize the ticketing text - that's the "selling" part.