A Review of BPM Magazine Advert by Miranda Sehl

i like the way you've cropped the images at the bottom of the page~ it lends itself well to music energy/waves.

i would say the most important wording is "Event for DJs" so keep that large and noticeable.. i would suggest making the text smaller, and left align.. the justification is creating large unpleasant gaps in the text. rivers, and streams... are flowing through your information.

i think that the second one is better as well, just not sure on the purple.. keep adjusting this, you've still got some work to do.

i dont really like the "more" in front of the information.. i suggest getting rid of the whole "more" idea. "This year Europe's largest event for DJ's" .

is that a plate that you put the bpm on in the corner? or a turn table? make it clearer maybe.. help us make sense of whats going on. cant wait to see what you do with it!