• Benjamin

    Benjamin

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    Posted on Apr 21, 2010 at 9:13 AM

    3, #2, & #5 are my favorites. I think those three would work as is however if you wanted something more original... #5 would look more related if you used hexagons like in an actual bee hive instead of the contemporary shapes that really don't relate intuitively . I dislike the font in #1 and #4 simply because it has no character or complimenting style. I think the drip in #4 is too playful to market toward corporate clients. Also with the color added, I think it would look better on light surfaces if the darker yellow in the gradient was the focus.

    • Sahus Pilwal
      Sahus Pilwal commented:
      Posted: on Apr 21, 2010 at 9:26 AM

      Hi Benjamin,

      Thanks for the feedback. I will rework #5 with hexagons ;)

      Do you have any font suggestions for #1 & #4??

      Cheers, Sahus

    • Benjamin
      Benjamin commented:
      Posted: on Apr 21, 2010 at 9:31 AM

      Maybe something like "Century Gothic" or more bold like "Impact" I would modify whatever you choose to use though like the font in #3. Certain letters stand out giving it the feel all its own. Overall good work!

      Cheers, Benjamin