A Review of Logo Design for a church by Marius Stuparu

make it less wide

  • Marius Stuparu

    Marius Stuparu

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    make it less wide

    Posted on Apr 21, 2010 at 2:53 AM

    I've made a small comment above about the "di" (which seems a bit squished there and tends to become invisible).

    Also, the whole logo seems too wide (the left part of the mountain mostly. Shorten the slope there, and/or even move the "church" inside the mountain shape (see the attached mock-up)

    • chiesadienna.jpg
    • theblackballoon
      theblackballoon commented:
      Posted: on Apr 21, 2010 at 6:44 AM

      I think you're right. I'll try something like that. The idea of black "di" is good. I was on that this morning. Thank you.

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    • Henrik Hedberg
      Henrik Hedberg commented:
      Posted: on Apr 21, 2010 at 11:32 PM

      Here's what I had in mind: http://www.hedberg.biz/temp/chiesadienna.png

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