A Review of Paper Recycling Poster for Schools by John McKenzie

Consistency

  • John McKenzie

    John McKenzie

    Rank: 2 Titan

    59

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 5
    2 Votes
    Consistency

    Posted on Aug 23, 2009 at 5:04 PM

    All the praising aside, I see one flaw.

    The words "STOP" and "THINK" are in capital letters, yet the word "recycle" is in lower-case letters. Did you not have enough room to fit the capital letters in?

    This would be more of a design enhancement, but putting an actual tree on the back of the traffic light (with the tree's branches blossoming out on top of the traffic light) would suit the poster more than having random branches with only a few leaves sticking out at random places, in my personal opinion.

    • Piervincenzo Madeo
      Piervincenzo Madeo commented:
      Posted: on Aug 24, 2009 at 5:33 AM

      simply fantastic!

      Report Abuse
    • Adana Jimenez
      Adana Jimenez commented:
      Posted: on Aug 24, 2009 at 9:06 AM

      • capital letters! wow, nice catch! • about putting an actual tree on the back, I was really pushing to go minimal, more of a "suggestion" of a tree, in order to allow the background image of the paper to have equal importance, but it makes sense, I just need to get the correct tree. thanks!

      Report Abuse
    Comment Report Abuse