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Hi Chad,
I will talk about usability - not about design :)
simple text is what sells. What is: 'streamlined remote studio based business'? :)
simple menu - what's 'work'? If it's portfolio call it portfolio. I don't think you need a link to blog in the main menu. People can access you blog from recent post.
Bigger Call to Action because right now you have 2 buttons with small font in the same colour. Use concept of Primary and secondary (smaller or below) CTA.
Visible scrolling - nobody will notice that there is a scrolling option under 'homepage portfolio' pictures.
less happy talk - nobody reads on the internet. On average users read 20% of content. I suggest you cut 60% from each paragraph. Try to write it in 'reverse pyramid' style with bolding for easier scanning.
wall of text - services and what do we have to offer will never be read.
clear position - so do you do websites or business cards??????
Desperate - Currently accepting projekts sounds desperate. I haven't heard about any company not accepting new business.
Keep with the good work :)
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Michael + Webcardinals commented:Chad :)
Our work is better than just Work
Yes I suggest creating a primary CTA and a secondary one.
I would suggest having navigation visible all the time. Some people will never notice them is they don't move their mouse over it.
I would use something in line 'Lets discuss your project now' instead of Currently accepting projects
cheers
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The blog is going to be an important part of the business, so that is why it's there, how about "Our Work", Portfolio seems to much like a student site...
You would suggest making one button bigger then the other?
There is an overlay navigation buttons when you rollover the screens
5, 6, 7 Will condense, and clear up text
Anybody have a problem with the Now Open Area??