A Review of AAW Logo Redesign by Lieven Dv

make tentacles less wide

  • Lieven Dv

    Lieven Dv

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

    64

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    make tentacles less wide

    Posted on Apr 20, 2010 at 7:13 AM

    The left one is nice one but might look so "generic" on business cards. The left works best as white on black background

    the middle one is best in color but the tentacles go too wide also, it doesn't work well in b/w

    the right one has a typical Arabic athmosphere to it. You wanted to achieve that or not? that black on white version works well.

    • Ari Suardiyanti
      Ari Suardiyanti commented:
      Posted: on Apr 20, 2010 at 4:19 PM

      Thanks, but Arabic? How's so? And no, I actually don't wanna achieve that for this project.

      Report Abuse
    • Lieven Dv
      Lieven Dv commented:
      Posted: on Apr 20, 2010 at 4:34 PM

      your letters resemble flower

      Every time I had to create for somebody with Arabic roots, it had to have some likewise flowers or references to them in similar shapes etc... coincidence perhaps.

      not my design but excellent example of what I'm trying to say :) http://z.about.com/d/tattoo/1/0/F/i/1/lotusflower.jpg

      Report Abuse
    • Ari Suardiyanti
      Ari Suardiyanti commented:
      Posted: on Apr 21, 2010 at 3:59 PM

      I got what you mean. Now it even makes me thinks it looks like a logo for one of food company >.< hehe, I got the feedback from the client and they chose the left logo, but somehow need a bit more revision. I'll see what I can do with this, I might post the revision here later. Thanks :)

      Report Abuse
    Comment Report Abuse