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I really like this quite a bit. It's very different, elegant and quite creative. Here are just a few comments I have:
- The logo is next to imposable to read. I would make it MUCH more readable.
- The three columns of text, what i do...a little about me...a good design recipe could use some help in the typography department. The small column widths make the text really staggered in some places and in general all of your text could you some more line height. I also don't like how you bold several words throughout the sentence, you use it so much that it loses it's effect.
As for everything else, love it! Very nice job here!
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Nate Hamilton commented:Yeah, maybe you could do a 25/75 split. I agree that that might improve things quite a bit. Good luck!

Thank you Nate. Based on yours and Maxim's feedback I'll be fixing those area. I am thinking about removing the third column and making it just two columns. I hope it will give me room to improve typography.