A Review of Vigneri - Give Bell Collection by Maxim Barkhatov

typographic treatment

  • Maxim Barkhatov

    Maxim Barkhatov

    Rank: 5 Advanced

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    typographic treatment

    Posted on Apr 19, 2010 at 11:24 AM

    I do agree with the majority that #3 is most appealing. However, I want to suggest some layout revisions, mainly typographic.

    The biggest issue is the tension created between the N in "Collection" and the chocolate bell picture. I think simply shrinking the word collection a bit would solve it, as well as create a nicer contrast against "Give".

    Also, the part where it says "All natural Milk Chcolate...." seems too close to the left edge. Nudging it to the right would ease that tension as well.