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Hi,
I will start at the top:
"If you order three or more items together we'd love to give you a discount. "
This may be a design call, my eye was directed immediately towards the part in pink, and after I read that I read the text before. This however made me feel cheated, as I first thought if I called I would get a discount, and then was told only if I did something. This fails for me because in the middle part of your website you have a banner with the same design, it being split. That banner however isn't one sentence and so works.
Your header section is nice, I like the layout, pricing and colours. My only concern is, would anyone notice the little dragger below (no other reviews here did), it took me a few seconds to realise what it was (this may however move on its own like a carousel, so would be clear pretty quickly).
The other sections look fine, again my only concern is where you have a vertical divide next to the download brochure section on the section below you have the same divide but this time its a scroll bar, would anyone notice that?
All the best
