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this might sound strange, but for me the whole top part (up to "our artwork is designed...") is too graphic. it's clear that you need and want to convey the "design" part, i think it's overdone to the point it's hard to really understand what's going on or what you're actually offering.
i like the bottom part better than the top. it's cleaner and has some kind of grid that makes the whole thing easier on the eye.
i would suggest:
- incorporating a more coherent grid.
- giving the price box more space and color (maybe even removing its frame)
- making your offering photos more conceptual/schematic/iconic rather than photos.
- maybe, as mentioned here, making the background color go brighter/darker. the current one seem to be not doing the design any good.
otherwise a good concept.
