A Review of critique help needed by Marius Stuparu

combine 1 & 3

  • Marius Stuparu

    Marius Stuparu

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    combine 1 & 3

    Posted on Apr 16, 2010 at 7:47 AM

    I like #1 most, it has more balance. But maybe bringing the triangular dots for the "i" from #3 would make the word "city" look more like a city (some kind of roofs). Or the "l" from #2 or #3.

    And also, the round part of the hole in "o" a bit bigger...