A Review of Website redesign for Paper | Publisher Industry by Haider Ali

need a bit more love and attention to rock it

  • Haider Ali

    Haider Ali

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 5
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    need a bit more love and attention to rock it

    Posted on Apr 15, 2010 at 1:25 AM

    Hey Eric... I got one word to say…. Piece of great work

    Not too much to say, however, I think few of things can be worked upon and could add value:

    • Shadow underneath the top bar could be improve... try using a hard opacity with some opacity, I think that might look good

    • Search icon in the top left might look good in green, also, “search” written in field could be a little lighter try using tone of Grey

    • Logo not working with the other visuals and seems losing in the rest of creative visuals, green tone used in “M” not working… I think try increase log size a bit so that I could appropriately in your layout

    • kid laying seem out of camera angel may be you could on this

    • 3 section above the footer looks very nice and I think if you try avoiding the green box and let it be hanging on green might look good

    • Footer seems perfect to me

    once again GREAT JOB...

    • Rodrigo Amorim
      Rodrigo Amorim commented:
      Posted: on Apr 15, 2010 at 9:43 AM

      Love the design. Hear the comments about it not being clear what the website is all about... I guess if you knew Portuguese, you'd find out that the "Areas of Operation" include: "Publisher; Bookshop; Forestry; Fibers; Promotions..." However, a tagline or slogan would perhaps go a long way in making this absolutely clear... as well as being a nice touch.