• Jared Granger

    Jared Granger

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    typeface

    Posted on Apr 10, 2010 at 6:55 PM

    Hey Sahus.

    The gradient on such a thing, sharp typeface just doesn't work. It becomes extremely hard to read.

    I don't mind having a elongated version as long as you have a lockup that is also more compact. A logo will have many different ways it's used and sometimes will not work in certain settings if too long.

    Play around with using the "hive combs" as letters within the text as well.

    • Sahus Pilwal
      Sahus Pilwal commented:
      Posted: on Apr 12, 2010 at 8:22 AM

      Hi Jared,

      Thanks for the feedback. I think the resounding feedback is to add the logo shape to the font type & lose the gradient.

      I will try some different concepts. Cheers, Sahus