A Review of Printing.ie - Website for B2B in Ireland by Ari Suardiyanti

Better, but need a bit more work

  • Ari Suardiyanti

    Ari Suardiyanti

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    Better, but need a bit more work

    Posted on Apr 10, 2010 at 6:26 AM

    It's a big improvement from the previous one. But here some small things you could try to change to make it even better:

    1. Menu bar: The first reviewer, Joe, was right about the Gradient on the menu bar. It's too strong, I would suggest you to change it with one color gradient with glossy look., and play around a bit with the text for the menu bar. Try all caps, then try to give some separation lines. See which one make the best look.
    2. Content alignment: The tittle of your print services and the subtext, and price are clutter. I would suggest you to place the price on top, followed by the tittle of your service, i.e: Business Card, under it. Then you can put the subtext and more info. I'm pretty sure it will help to make the content alignment looks more organized.
    3. Style consistency: I really like how you make the prints sticking out at the first line of your content. But it seems like you don't apply it in other services. Try to make them all in the same style, including the Logo service. I noticed that you have a shout box on the right. But I think if you place the service name and price like the above it will work better too.

    From what i see, this is almost done. Just need bit of polishing. :) Good luck.

    • Stephen O'Sullivan
      Posted: on Apr 18, 2010 at 12:11 AM

      Hi Ari, I changed the menu bar to grey and I think it looks much better. What do you think of the slider idea for more products in the first two rows of items. Cheers Stephen