• Ezequiel Jaime

    Ezequiel Jaime

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    1 Vote
    Needs to be improved

    Posted on Apr 09, 2010 at 5:57 PM

    Hello Sahus,

    Unfortunately this is not working form me. I can't see you put any effort to do this, too easy... some font with a gradient some really predictible icon, I'd suggest you try to find a stronger concept.

    If you still want to keep this idea, please read below some guidelines:

    1. Uppercase: I think all text in uppercase is not a good idea, it makes the logo really though and even more with that sharp angles font you used. Try different alternatives with some other font and some lowercase.

    2. You need to make this more compact, now it is just too spread away, too many blank space on most of them and the one you put the HIVE below needs more padding and a better alignment, now looks odd.

    3. The one with the darker background looks good, the contrast is good but you need to fix the colours when using lighter backgrounds.

    4. The hive icon (seriously?) Why don't you try to incorporate it to the text instead of having it floating you don't know where?? This will improve your concept aswell.

    I hope I wasn't so harsh, but you need to work much harder on this.

    • Sahus Pilwal
      Sahus Pilwal commented:
      Posted: on Apr 10, 2010 at 1:00 PM

      Hi Ezequiel,

      No thank you for the feedback it's much appreciated. I certainly need to work on some new concepts however I did spend a great deal of time researching fonts so will upload a selection of fonts on my next concept!

      Thanks again ;)

    • Sahus Pilwal
      Sahus Pilwal commented:
      Posted: on Apr 15, 2010 at 8:54 AM

      Hi Ezequiel,

      What do you think now of the newer fresher concepts?

      Cheers, Sahus