• Ari Suardiyanti

    Ari Suardiyanti

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    Posted on Apr 09, 2010 at 2:08 AM

    When I look at this design, I can't really figured where to set my eyes first. You have too many things going on.

    1. There's too many different colors around the website.
    2. The design images and the service banner (special prices and else) look messy and unprofessional.
    3. You don't have to stuff the website with many different icons here and there. Choose where to put them in certain place(s), like the ones on the home page (this week's great offer,...) is a good start.
    4. Pick a professional images of people in printing. The image you use at the last page looks really unprofessional.

    Try looking at some clean website like these: http://www.kre8iveminds.com/images/websites/website-1 http://www.websitetemplates.bz/images/0634m.jpg

    But if you insist on the full color concept, see this example: http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/300W/f/2010/090/1/6/FlexbyColl3ctive.jpg

    Good luck :)