• Johnathan Tan

    Johnathan Tan

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

    83

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    More focused

    Posted on Apr 07, 2010 at 11:30 PM

    I think the design is nice and colorful, however you might want to make your graphics more focused and less cluttered, especially the business cards page, it's too busy I don't know where to look first.

    Overall a good attempt that can be polished up.