A Review of Post-it Ad by Miranda Sehl

what you've got works, but minor suggestions..

  • Miranda Sehl

    Miranda Sehl

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    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
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    what you've got works, but minor suggestions..

    Posted on Apr 07, 2010 at 5:17 PM

    this is a spectacular idea. i would say only tiny tweaking to make it completely awkward-free. sharpie is good. i think the finger lines don't really make sense, the ribbon is the reminder. but i see why you added them.. i wonder if dotted lines might be a good strategy? maybe you don't need the lines at all?

    i think you should add the ends of the string that come down off of the knot. i made a rough addition in photoshop and attached it below.

    great work on this, i love the idea and your execution so far is fantastic.

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    • Joe Mulberry
      Joe Mulberry commented:
      Posted: on Apr 13, 2010 at 5:49 AM

      on this one, I will have to disagree with you miranda. The not without the finger lines does not work as well as with the finger lines.