A Review of Dukes Cakes by Octavio Corral

bit too busy in the middle

  • Octavio Corral

    Octavio Corral

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    bit too busy in the middle

    Posted on Aug 19, 2009 at 12:32 PM

    I like it a lot but feel that the curvy text along with all of the tiny dots, the hat, the french symbol, the circle,

    are all doing too much.

    Try to simplify the center a bit.