A Review of Aljiro Creative Logo Draft 1 by Ezequiel Jaime

...but it looks like just that, a start. Though the font is quite nice and the pen idea cool, you need to improve this concept.

First, you'll need to make it more compact, maybe try to split it in 2 lines.

I agree with Miro, this looks quiet plain and boring, you have to spice it up.

How this "i/pen" will look it you'll need to reduce the logo pretty much? Do you think it still be perceptible?

Play around a little more with this idea, it's a nice concept, you can poolish it a lot.