A Review of Personal Logo by Javier

it is hard to understand

  • Javier

    Javier

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    it is hard to understand

    Posted on Apr 04, 2010 at 12:57 AM

    this is a cool concept, but understandable just after read the brief, maybe you could work over the "C" a little bit more, and definitely it will be better if you manage the "C" in a different color,

    What about use the external part of the bulb?? maybe it is a better way to represent the concept, the interior is a little complicate to understand.

    take a look to this little mockup, it is not clear enough but maybe it could give you some idea.

    by the way I use a bulb concept with my logo too.

    oops!!! sorry I forgot put some start Design 3 purpose 4 originality 3 engagement 2

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    • Brittany Lawrence
      Posted: on Apr 04, 2010 at 10:33 AM

      I like your suggestion, however, I don't want it to be obvious that it's a light bulb. I do plan to color it in a way where it would make it more obvious similar to what you've suggested, but I'm not gunna have threads :p <3